He crouches low,Shoulders hunched over,Tail pounding at the grey carpeting below his velvet paws,his eye's gaze fixed on the quivering blue strip of fleece,"Thump, thump, thump." Staring,Advancing forwards Pulls back, muscles tense,POUNCE! Rip it up! Tear it up! He shows a full mouth of sharp teeth, then sinks those leather weapons into his prey he clenches it with his hook like claws then a hand comes to him and strokes his fur Someone lets out a laugh, "Eddy! Your such a crazy cat!"
"Crazy?" He thinks "Not crazy,Wild. That's what I am, a Wild Cat!"
He starts to purr then the Wild Cat curls up next me, soft and warm. I kiss his head, "Okay, Wild Cat."
"Now she's got it," he thinks, "Wild Cat!"
Author notes
Written March 15th, 2005
A contest entry
- My first contest by McIntosh1985.
300 points, ended March 21, 2005, 4 entries
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I like this a lot - so direct and a precious story as shewolfnative already commented. Fantastic write, keep it going.
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What a precious little story. Well done! could you check something for me? "Staring,Advancing ". Tks.
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