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True but False

True but false
We dream of things better
Fantasy yet reality
The sum of
Torture and pleasure

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Written March 14th, 2005

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  • Solidified
    August 17, 2008

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    It makes my head go in circles, the good kind. The kind that brings up new revelations. I think I'm figuring that it's torture and pleasure in reality and in fantasy land.

  • -Silenced Dreams-
    March 15, 2005
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    Short, sweet but deep and powerful at the same time. A very meaningful write... thanks for sharing.

    Take Care
    - Becca