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~Darling Dear~




Your eyes are the pools I swim in
As the waves crash upon my face
Lost in your lovely smile
With thy luscious lips I taste

Each sip is like a dream divine
As I breathe the breath of you
Confession of my heart I give
All before the morning dew

Silky skin as ivory sheets
Wrapped all night in layers of love
Capturing dreams with each embrace
My spirit soars for two my dove

It's you that makes the me in we
And through your songs I soar
For only one woman can have this heart
And this heart belongs to yours




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Thanks for reading me, much love to all! -Timothy
Written March 14th, 2005

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  • Sherry gold member
    March 19, 2005
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    Timothy,
    This is beautifuly written, it shows being faithful to your wife and a love you hold for them. Yet how true to only them and how much you do love them lovely read. It also shows the quailties you admire about them such as the eyes and smile that you adore could feel your happiness in being married to in the blessings you each share. Ok I'm done off to next one...I owe you some reads... God bless you, Sherry
    Edited on Mar 19, 11:57 p.m. because ''.


  • Kukana gold member
    March 19, 2005
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    This is so very romantic and so full of love... your wife is a very lucky woman who has a man like you to be able to express his love so freely...
    S~


  • tearrsofthemoon
    March 18, 2005
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    Wow. Very well written. A lot of emotion! Very good! I (V) it!


  • ceegeeess
    March 18, 2005
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    brilliant

    "For only one woman can have this heart
    And this heart belongs yours" extremely nice dear brother!


  • Samplette gold member
    March 16, 2005
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    You have such a romantic soul. I have always thought how blessed you wife is to have such a poetic hubby. I am blessed with a wonderful man, and I still hope to one day receive a piece of poetry from him. As long as there's hope....
    Beautiful work Timothy.
    S♠m


  • Julie Eke
    March 16, 2005
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    critical

    very very sweet, you obviously love this person very much. You described just how much with this eloquently written piece.
    good job


  • mad hattie
    March 16, 2005
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    This is soooo beautiful...what a blessing it is to see the best of yourself in another, and then the serenity of synergy that follows...this is a gorgeous expression of romantic love, but I sense it goes even beyond that, it is what humans were created for since the beginning of time. Beautiful beautiful write.


  • Reframing-Quill
    March 16, 2005
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    Your enchanting words, nay I cannot believe, "went into my ears…"
    Indubitably, though, ‘twas words which we hardly ever here...?
    Was it not a “precious” holy vowed word of "monogamy-?"
    This truly encapsulates the mirror of self-love; for only to the degree that one loves himself is one then able to love another "to the same degree!" What a majestically warm and endearing muse of SOUL-MATE TRUE-LOVE... Thank you.


  • Remaining000
    March 16, 2005
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    very nice. I am so happy for you. u did a great job and I cant wait to read more. God bless, with no regrets. ~347~ keep it up.


  • Mystical-Gardenia
    March 16, 2005
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    Lovely romantic poem!!

    This is a romantic (chocolate poem... leaving one craving chocolate) very well woven "Each sip is like a dream divine
    As I breathe the breath of you
    Confession of my heart I give
    All before the morning dew" Wonderful work!! Wishing you and yours much success in all of your endeavors


  • masterblaster gold member
    March 16, 2005
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    You always write these lovely romantic poems, this as all your poems a great pleasure to read, well written good structure, and good use of words, a winner ,a very lovely poem, lucky lady to have her man write such wonderful words for her, all the best, Di


  • Diamond
    March 16, 2005
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    Love is Grand!!

    Beautiful Timothy, this poem is a reflection of the person that you are, of the love you give, of a heart that truly cares. As always you capture love with your wonderful poetic heart and wrap us all in your loving embrace. Thank you for sharing you and for being the man that you are.

    All my love,

    Avril
    Edited on Mar 16, 8:03 because ''.


  • Ladybug
    March 16, 2005
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    so elegantly beautifully stated in this piece of the one and only spoken heart


  • Sharon Corr gold member
    March 16, 2005
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    Brilliance TRUE GOLD

    "Darling Dear"
    How i long to hold you near
    Whispering sweet nothings in your ear
    Your charming graceful poetic ways
    Capture me long ago on that sunny day
    Beauteous beauty from your feather pen
    Once again, we soar to the heavens as friends
    I hope you know my love is true
    I can stop loving you
    We have a gift of love to share
    As our touches soar sprits dancing on air
    If only now could be
    The found place of you and me
    If you are me and i am you
    There is only one thing left to do
    To unite the me into we
    And soar as one in the Lords destiny
    Timothy i am so proud of you
    Your tendering sharing is beyond compare
    You light so many hearts with words that heal the many
    You’re a treasure chest of precious gems permanently
    I long to hold your hand in mine was the journey worth the find
    I'm holding your heart so near and dear I swear i shall never part
    From the love, we share as one beating heart.

    ~XXX Hugs, Love, Kisses, Eternal Peace, Sharon~


  • Mary O gold member
    March 15, 2005
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    "Each sip is like a dream divine
    As I breathe the breath of you" -Poeticweaver indeed. Lovely work Tim.
    ~Mary O


  • March 15, 2005
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    For only one woman can have this heart
    And this heart belongs to yours

    Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww....I'm sorry but this was the sweetest poem ever I think....awwwwwwwwww!! I love those last two lines. I wish some guy would someday said that to me...that I was the only one allowed to have his heart. Wow, yea this brought a tear to my eye. Awwwwwwwwwwwww!!! I love those last two lines...yea I know I told you already but omg there toooo perfect. It captures your beautiful words and flows amazingly smooth!! Awwwwwwwww!!!

    ~Lyndz~


  • Aerestheth
    March 15, 2005
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    What beautiful words! It is not often I find a love poem so sweetly done. The flow held a grace, the words had an elegance-the entire mood was brought to life. But the ending was my favorite part. Wonderfully done! Your wife should be honored!
    ~Jessica


  • french poet
    March 15, 2005
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    Very very sweet indeed... such a beautiful poem, beautiful line... It does push beauty beyond limits I would never thought would be possible... great job


  • texast
    March 15, 2005
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    elegant

    a wonderful piece

    ...T


  • DearBrownEyes
    March 15, 2005
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    this is great its so beautiful and elegant. from what i read i got a twist to it. as if your dreaming of this person and your so in love with this person, but his heart belong to "her" great. good job at writing this.

  • sweethunni
    March 15, 2005
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    good

    true i take it is about someone you love


  • dabrat
    March 15, 2005
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    This is love, as love should be


  • queenie
    March 15, 2005
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    a classic timothy love poem,the ones i love so.this one just seems so much more tender.it's designed to make a woman swoon as she reads it.any woman wants to think that this was written exclusively for her.you are a gem.


  • Lyrical Soul silver member
    March 15, 2005
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    Such sweet words that drip of honey and morning love Wonderful write sweety. Your words ALWAYS put a smile on my face. Lovely!

    ~Lyrical


  • tattoomysoul
    March 15, 2005
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    Everything you write is so beautiful you weave your words together so wonderfully. Good job I love reading your pieces.


  • Sunkissedrose
    March 15, 2005
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    beautiful

    Love is in the air...beautiful beautiful piece. Your wife is such a lucky woman to have the love that she has from you. I hope you show her these, if you don't, you most certainly need too.
    ~Carrie
    s


  • iznogoud
    March 15, 2005
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    Yep...there!

  • Red Red Rose
    March 15, 2005
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    very touching

    The metaphors you use to describe your wife are nothing short of exquisite. The background adds to the feeling here and I just loved it!To be able to watch someone in their sleep and feel such strong emotions is true love, deep love.I love you Timothy for your loving words to all, especially your wife!Love,
    Linda XOXO


  • maryannde gold member
    March 14, 2005
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    There is something about a Timothy poem that always touches places hidden within me. I looked up love poem in the dictionary and it said..."See poeticweaver"

    Nothing...and I do mean nothing...as lovely as reading a piece in which I feel the depth of your heart, your love for another.

    Very enjoyable my friend...


  • smiley
    March 14, 2005
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    I really felt the love in this piece. Wow this was really wonderful. It seems like you have placed your heart for all of us to see ane read it.

    Yvonne


  • -Jessica-
    March 14, 2005
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    great

    Your eyes are the pools I swim in
    As the waves crash upon my face


    This was really sweet!! This girl is lucky to have a guy write something for her. keep on writing.


  • sarahspoeticheart
    March 14, 2005
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    Amazing

    Very beautiful piece dear Timothy. You're poetry reminds me so much of my own. I can connect with your pieces on that different level where I almost feel like I could have written it myself. Your rhymes suck me in to the moment... the feeling of what is happening behind the words.

    I love when you write poetry like this my friend. I really do. In this world, if we don't have people like this to write about and the love that is given to them day in a day out, then what the hell is it all for?

    She is a lucky lady.

    Passionate and lovely write bro. Thank you for writing this.

    Much love,
    Lady Sarah~~~


  • peluche
    March 14, 2005
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    This was stunning. I've seen your name on my mom's poems alot (rosepatrick) so I thought I check you out.The emotions in this piece were amazing and conveyed with such clarity. I thought the rhythm and flow were beautifully excuted. Amazing write.

  • Neef Kykmytros
    March 14, 2005
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    Sweet. It positively drips with pure love.
    The rhyme scheme is archaic but not forced. Very well done there.
    I am jealous. I wish I could feel like this again.


  • MYownFreedom
    March 14, 2005
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    Very nice usage of words nice write

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