If this is how you wish it
with all your people in poverty
and all the children running naked in the streets
Then you are not for me
and your kingdome is not as free
as you presented it to be
If this is how you wish it
then your wish is not for me
I thought you a noble man
a man with a dream, the golden sceptor in his hand
a man that could have changed the world
but you'd rather hide behind me
my dreams have defied me
and now I am left with the destruction of my city
Author notes
It goes with a story I am writing
Written March 14th, 2005
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great!
This was really interesting but I would like to know the muse behind the piece. I really enjoyed this piece and I hope to see more good pieces like this in the future!
Peace,
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hm....interesting...what's the story you're writting called?
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sounds like a few countries in the news currently and a pipe dream as well, but an oil pipe dream of one of our own leaders, and for all of that men and women die while children run naked in the street and families stil go hungry....a very deep write, I applaud you. and If i had any applauds left I'd give you one of those to...lo...Artis
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Very good
Very passionate. It flows well, and the words are perfectly placed. Very good. -
awesome, very imaginitive and creative
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