Strapped to the back of a rapid attack- it's hunger.
Wasting away the leniency of little supply.
I stumble, I fall, your unbreakable walls-
They've left me.
You add and subtract your Fake from your lack
[Of courage]
And expect us not to know the difference.
I was there from the start-
An unshakable, unbreakable heart that knows
Which way it lies.
She knows which way the wind blows-
[LIES]
and has found her upper in a
flurry of greetings and goodbye's of unexpected
Frequent Flyer Miles-
I view the world through a shaded lens-
an ambidextrous image of
Startling clarity- of which the forms have been brought to life by
Injection of mental sanity.
My love- your trash.
Tumbling down through the shadow of existence which
Breaks Barriers-
Barriers of radioactive waste which is strongly familiar.
[MINE]
Mine are held high by a lethal injection-
A concoction of Who,
Why,
Where,
How,
And the audacity to know the difference.
[Direction.]
Author notes
It looks better written on paper...
Written March 14th, 2005
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good...but...but...good.
good but it felt kinda raw if that makes sense. don't get me wrong 'raw' can be good i just feel that this needs a little more [as your last line says] "direction."
though in its self, the poem, i felt i dunno a blur of emotions nothing settling and nothing too positve. powerfully written and something that i do like, and also something that i will have to come back and read again to see what i can pull.
peace
chatter -
I LOVE IT!
WoW hunny. How come you can write so absolutly, just oh my god. It was wonderful - and it looks amazing on the computer...Although I dont know what it looks like on paper. You know it might be all colorful and all Ellen- hard to read hand writing like. ::chuckles:: But it was great. I always love reading your poems!!!! You know maybe one day I might learn how to be as --raaa gooodness-- like My Ellenore over here! Great poem! Keep posting, I don't get enough poemness!!!
Love You!!!
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