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Tease

twirl
feather
gently glide
tickle my face
tease

Author notes

Why do I smell like tacos?? Ha....I don't know....

Written March 14th, 2005

A contest entry

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  • Trellis
    April 8, 2005
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    I love this because it is very playful! I need that escape! Especially now when my life is in the trash! Great job!

  • unicorns r love
    March 28, 2005
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    fds

    lalalalal i really liked that but here is mai point getting scheme i need 40 more lol kjfsdlglkjhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh jjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj jjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj jjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj jjjjjjjjjjj jjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj jjjjjjjjjjjjjj jjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj jjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj jjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu jjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj jjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu ghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hggggggggggggggggggggggggg hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh


  • Alahmorah
    March 23, 2005
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    Ha, you are crazy faethae.....Go ride on the bus.
    Love, Ashlee

  • unicorns r love
    March 23, 2005
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    boooob

    boobs and patrick cuz ridin on tha bus with ellen and mpping the stage and bums and toilet paper and moonkeys and stuff ndsdnj lnrfsljfsd djf;lkf skjflsdj jd ldjfdj iejfljd asdfsd lkdsfsd dksld dkslfjdlf dskljd kijfd BOOOOOOOOOOOBS dad mom ac/dc metalica mm mangina


  • x9Nocturnal9x
    March 17, 2005
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    I'm ticklish too and just reading this made me feel tickled..lol uh oh! Anyway I like the words you used here..perfect for the lovely lanturne form! Great write and best of luck in the contest
    -Lis


  • March 14, 2005
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    How do you do these Ashlee, beautiful... I can never get the right words for the impact, but you have done a wonderful job! All the best in the contest, it's excellent! Love, Annie


  • Trellis
    March 14, 2005
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    This is great! I almost did one about feathers - but not like this! This is really creative! Best of luck!


  • CarterTachikawa
    March 14, 2005
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    Very, very nice image. I fear the feathers though. I'm ticklish. Very ticklish. Nicely done. Thanks for entering and good luck!

    ~CT


  • Rose Dark Thorn silver member
    March 14, 2005
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    Nice imager in so few words. Nicely done and good luck.

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