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Promise


        They say set it free
         it'll come back
          if meant to be.
     Would you come back
         come back to me?

Accept my past.
take in the good and the bad.

Stand by my side
at all times.

Give your hand
receive both of mine.

Love me
so I can love you.

Be a friend
true till the end.

Share your deepest secrets
trust in me
and I'll trust in you.

When times are tough
would you runaway
or stick it out?
Reassure me,
with open arms.

Never having doubts
or second thoughts
of you and me.

Let nothing ever in our way
of our present
or what our future may bring.

Take a journey
together we stand
as a couple hand in hand,
body, heart, mind, and soul.

Promise this all to me
and in return
you'll receive
Forever and eternity.

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Written October 4th, 2004

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  • Virginia Logsdon
    September 17, 2008

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    This poem is so romantic and heartfelt!

    You sound like you really want to know love that's true. My very best prayers and wishes for you!{OopSeey-Dazey!I didn't mean to make that ryme!}

  • angeledtweety
    March 14, 2005
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    GREAT

    great poem here..you did excellent..things that one should answer for the help of a stronger relationship..i feel some sadness in here though..this is such a great write


  • March 14, 2005
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    OMG OMG OMG!!!!!! I LOVE THIS POEM, wow what a great poem to read after yesterday...long story! You helped me so much! I KNOW KNOW WHAT TO DO! Omg I had tears in my eyes, i can relate to this poem a million percent! Great write, AMAZING WRITE!!!! AMEN!!!!!!!!!!!!