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Clay Figures

i linger for your touch
i melt when i think of you
wish you were here with me
so we can mold each other

i love the way you smile
when you look at me
i love when you touch my hair
everytime you hold me

i long for your kiss
the softness of it
i shiver when you touch me
hoping we might be together

(10-20-02)

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Written March 13th, 2005

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  • crazybeautiful6
    March 13, 2005
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    awww this is really sweet Keep it up Great Job
    Kristen