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forever and always

I miss you with a passion deep within my soul
maybe to some a Corney phrase,
but to it's an important phase
Each night I lie awake,
living off memories
and thoughts.
It seems so long for us,
so much time and space,
the threads that bind our hearts together,
are being stretched.
I wish only to be with you forever;
Forever and always.

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To my boyfriend...
I miss you!
Written March 13th, 2005

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  • QueenT
    April 25, 2005
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    this was a great poem once again, you have done a great job. You have talent! This one was really sweet although it left me unsure, Do you miss him because he's gone away on like vacation or do you miss him cos he broke up with you? Im not to sure. LOL. Either way this was a really well written poem. Take care.
    ~QueenT~


  • angry giirl
    April 17, 2005
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    Really really good poem!! It's so wonderful to be in love!


  • Mandy Pants
    April 15, 2005
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    awww how love-ly. i miss love. youre lucky you found it, hold on to it too.

  • ImOnlyGunnaBeMe
    April 6, 2005
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    wow this is awesome i felt every word of it! my BF gets bad grades (because he is lazy) and he gets grounded alot so sometimes i go weeks without talking to him...i get to missing him soo much...and i love him so much...so yah i know how it is...good job!
    ~courtney


  • Jenn-Swenson
    March 14, 2005
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    wonderful

    hey i relaly liked this alot i can relate to it this is great and really sweet. you did a great job on it. keep it up!!!
    -Jenn

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