This
Affair,
My love
Affair with
Spending too
Much time here.
I spend too much
Time to forget
Passion and pen,
Time I've put in,
To just lose my voice
And remember what it was
To be without words.
I don't want to let
This love affair end.
Author notes
I feel like I can't write anymore; this is very much about writing poetry, if you can understand that.
Written March 13th, 2005
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wow a lover affair those tend to be exciting and dangerous haha its a great poem thank you for sharing it with the rest of us and best of luck with the affair hope it works out for ya
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Like entering a new world...love the metaphor to writing you used here...
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Ahhhh, a wonderful tribute to the "need" to write the poem, or to just write. Indeed, I don't believe I could stop if I tried...
peace
doug
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very interesting! me likes. very goood
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excellent.
We all go empty at some time, this is very good though. and I love the shape. We all ove writing on this site and we just keep at it, even when our minds feel like mush. -
like they said wow thats increadible short but sweet
rock on
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wow amy....very good job hehe and they're right it does kinda look like a yard gnome lmfao very interesting....but anyways good job keep it up! hehe
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It does look like a yard gnome, lol.
The desire to write comes and goes. Don't worry about it. When the inspiration hits, you'll write. This poem also speaks out as using words to forget our everyday lives, to get lost in the writing. -
...OH MY GOD. I just looked at this and realized...IT LOOKS EXACTLY LIKE A YARD GNOME!
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It's shaped like a yard gnome... and the writing's good, too!
good job! 
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really good, i like the style of this one, i would add an applause but i have used my bonus applauses up for today, and i dont have many points to spare.
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You got it...thanks for the comment, Holden
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I feel the same. I seem to have lost any poetic thought, and to a greater extent, any particular love for anything. Though that's just in moments. I get times when I don't feel anything, and it's really shite. I've tried to write about it several times but I couldn't. Nice to see you have, and in a pretty way too
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lol...i love the shape ....and i thought it was a way cool poem and i totally understood everything u said...i rekindled my affair of spending too much time here myself...but yes, i very much liked it, as i like all of yours
love you amy
much love and respect
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"I also like how the poem speaks of love, and the shape is that of a dildo"
ROFL I love you
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I understand it quite well actually. Its a love affair, and an addiction. I could never explain it, but you've been able to say what I couldn't through this poem. Rock on Proxy!
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Deep man, way deep. And I wonder if it's possible for you to write, and still not have a soul? I also like how the poem speaks of love, and the shape is that of a dildo; come on you know you did that on purpose
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What a thought...I think I'll have to quote that on my author's page.
Thank you very much for the comment
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you are blessed with a gift the ability to write great stuff ,
i look at people who i know don't write , and tend to think they are without a soul . -
Is it, though?
lol Wonderful write amy my love...
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