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Still In Love With You

You said you still love me and you’d always wait for me
I was the one who let you go, so why do I care you’re with her?
I found someone new, so I’m not alone, but seeing the way you smile at her
Baby, it tears me up in side.
No matter what I say, I’m still in love with you

I miss your smile, your laugh, your touch
The way you looked at me and the feeling of love in your eyes.
Even though I’m with somebody new, I still regret letting you go.
I’m still holdin’ on, still in love with you.

Sometimes at night when the moon is shining bright
I wonder if you do the same things with her as you did with me.
I guess it shouldn’t matter, I’m supposed to be happy, right?
But just the thought of you calling her angel is more than I can bear.
No matter what I say, I’m still in love with you.

I miss your smile, your laugh, your touch
The way you looked at me and the feeling of love in your eyes.
Even though I’m with somebody new, I still regret letting you go.
I’m still holdin’ on, still in love with you.

In my sweetest dreams I’m wrapped in your arms tight;
Holding you, kissing you, loving you.
I used to hate the dark but now I see it’s the only place we’ll be one.
Oh baby, can’t you see I’m still in love with you?

I miss your smile, your laugh, your touch
The way you looked at me and the feeling of love in your eyes.
Even though I’m with somebody new, I still regret letting you go.
I’m still holdin’ on, still in love with you.

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Written March 12th, 2005

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  • penman gold member
    October 23, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and so well done. A terrific write. Thank you for sharing.


  • blondeoverblue
    April 5, 2005
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    Very heart-felt emotion, and so true. We do often hang onto the past long after we should have let it go, but there is a feeling there that just pulls at one's heart strings when you see an ex with someone new, it makes no difference if you are now with someone else too.

    Small typo in first verse/stanza: Baby, it tears me up in side.

    Nice work, good to see you back

    Kat xxx


  • poeticweaver gold member
    March 21, 2005
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    Great!

    A very well written and expressed piece here, yes, the flow is lovely and sad, and it's like I can hear music to it, I think many can relate to your lyrics here!

    Keep up the wonderful songs, and I shall be along laters to read your sweet soul!

    -Timothy

  • pozo
    March 16, 2005
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    Great poem/lyrics I liked the way you expressed your feelings here Keep writing, this was a great poem/song which I liked a lot
    All the best,
    Pozo