Please.
That word.
That magic word.
But you gave a different magic to it.
Please
From your lips,
Please.
Icy and hot white across the air stinging and caressing my nape.
Please.
Like clawing talons yet a human hand on my back, patient.
Please.
From your lips
Scraping across my skin, my throat, like light and shadow, scuffing my womb;
Please.
Jagged razor yet a feather from angel wings and high-level clouds.
Please.
From your lips.
Like a brick wall falling yet a kiss from the breeze
Please.
Please.
Pleas.
It's just incomprehensible how or why
from your please please please pleas.
I walked away
Author notes
Many thanks to BluPoetess for the proofread.
Written March 12th, 2005
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Babe you have so much skill in your fingers. Truly .. You took one word and wrote such a awesome write around it.. Take Care and Be Safe, Catressa
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very cool, i loved the long lines, it seemed kinda sexy, my favorite one was
Jagged razor yet a feather from angel wings and high-level clouds.
that was rad, the end was a cool twist too, sorry this is so short but im in a hurry, -
From you lips
Scraping across my skin, my throat, like light and shadow, scuffing my womb;
your* instead of you.
very interesting read. the kind of please that makes you sick to your stomach? thats how i took it anyways. different. interesting. good job with this. enjoyed.
BLu -
very good talent
Hiya honey i hope you are ok, cant wait to chat to you on msn messenger. Very nice poem. xx Zac -
Oh god. i wish i were like you, churning out good poetry always and always. havent' been writing lately. some psychic (psycho) pants just gave us three fucking papers to work on, 12 pages long. I wish i were like you...
Keep writing
Kannika -
I love it big time !!
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