a bird sings softly
it's melody speaks of love
bringing happiness
dee garner
october 12, 2002
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Written October 13th, 2002
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I'm smiling at this...tomorrow I hope to hear the sound of the birds chirping as I wake up...hoping...
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Nice to give these old poems new life by rereading them now and again. Lovely short verse you have penned here - hoping to see many more birds in a short while- once the snow all goes. Still have lots of it around, with flurries forecast for this evening.
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How those melodies do enchant us, promises of brighter, warmer days to fuel our weary hearts and soul. Whispers in a lovers ear or songs of the birds, each infuse us with life. Great one!
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Well its only right that I read one of your haikus in return
but its really not fair because I pale so miserably in comparison to your work Dee 
This was so beautiful in every way - inspiring to say the least
I loved the tune of your words, they were so gently persuasive when read aloud!
Rohina
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awwwwwwwwww this was soooo precious I almost had tears in my eyes. This piece was great. I loved it granna!
Kari -
Very peaceful and saying so much, wonderful haiku catz, you, like I said before, have a great talent for writing haikus, and others, I have read a few, they're excellent!
best wishes as always
Moonstone Virgo
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wow!!! how do you do that? i am not sure that i will be able to accomplish what you do in so few words. viyanna
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Do Not Touch It!
Awwwww...so cute..short n sweet..perfectly describes love in a few lines..well you did a VERY good job! Thanx for sharing! Keep up the great work!
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This is my favorite you have done so far so simple yet so sweet a lovely haiku Catz ive tried these like with the 5 7 5 but lol I was informed that wasnt always so- so I stick with mostly tankas anyhows this is really a lovely piece...Sherry:O) -
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Nice feel Dee. Keep 'em comin' -tj- -
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awwwww i love birdies.. great job.. HUGS Lee -
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Very sweet indeed, we always seem to equate birdsong, spring and love. They go so well together don't they! Your KU is lovely Catz! You have a wonderful grasp for these! I hope to see many more from you! ~Laura :) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) -
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I've always wished I could write organized poems. This is a beautiful haiku and describes the situation well.
~Jennifer~ -
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sweet thing.
sometimes, when i hear a bird singing, i get lost in the melodies and it's like the rest of the world is on pause and i could just stay there forever.. caught in that moment of brilliance.
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hehe this was cute
so short, but there is so much to think about when it comes to this piece :) -
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This is beautiful Dee and conjurs up many images with just a few words. Nicely penned.....Desiree
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mum you touched my heart with love tonight that is what I
needed, thanks for the daily doses You so gracely leave around for us to be touched by it. -
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Nice form and a lovely sentiment. Bird songs do generate feelings of happiness in me, and spread a sense of God's love. -
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ohhhhh so pretty
I had a memory just now of my mom, she used to sit outside and watch the birds early AM no matter how cold it was, she took a few moments to watch them.
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*sigh*
can you please send that little bird this way to sing under my windows?
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Dee
I just love the sounds of birds chirping in early am mornings
esp the mocking bird
Lovely Ku
Thanks for your comments on my poems too
Love ya
Susan~ -
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Oh Catz this is beautiful, cute and sweet. just a lovely piece girl. -
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very cute i have to agree. with so little words it brings a pool of thoughts and emotions. great work
crystal
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