I look out upon the world
this place of wonder and array
as the natural beauty unfurls
putting on its impressive display
so many things astonishing
being discovered every day
from the shark that swims in the sea
to the soothing weather in the spring
from the darkest shade of grey
to every living thing
the stunning creations of the wild
to everything we may be
from the laughter of a child
to the joys that it can bring
from everything in existence
to what we may believe
and it all comes together
at this wonderful point in time
as if to live on forever
serene, within this world of mine
Thoughts on the subject?
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amazing
wow, paints an almost palpable picture of the peace of nature.
very well done -
Very smooth and flowing poem of the beauty and appreciation of nature. Very well done indeed...Scott
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This poem is out of this world and speechless. Just beautiful!!! Looove the rhymes too. When u stop for a second and look around in creative silence, the details of God's creation are enlightened. Love these lines -
from the darkest shade of grey
to every living thing
the stunning creations of the wild
to everything we may be
His pasture is ever present in beautiful colors and shapes. Thanx for your awesome poem!
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Got imagery down here, painting a vibrant yet picture gentle picture with words, as my fine friend put it.
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