M arch twelfth is your forty fifth birthday
A re you ready to have a wonderful time?
R ockets will light up the Canadian sky,
C arrying fireworks just for you that say
"H appy birthday dear Gregg we love you".
T ake a look around you at all your friends
W aiting to celebrate this blessed day with you,
E ach one of them bearing a gift for you.
L ove is one wrapped with loving care,
F riendship I see in great abundance,
T ears of joy as you accept each one,
H appiness shining from your face.
2 see you happy is my wish for you,
0 pen the one you received from me.
0 verflowing with love dear brother,
5 thousand hug's are coming your way.
Happy Birthday Gregg
Author notes
I have chosen a combination of
category number 2 & 3
A birthday wish, plus an Acrostic
Billie Jean, Hapy Birthday for the 13th
that date is also my Son Michaels, he'll be 39
Written March 12th, 2005
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This was absolutely great A/J. I think Gregg will be overjoyed with all the best wishes.
Love Mia
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This is a beautiful Acrostic that shines your light of friendship right through it. You are such a loving and giving person. It has been wonderful to watch you grow as a poet and to produce such wonderful pieces of art. You captured the Acrostic with wonderful rythmn and flow which is not easy to do. I enjoyed reading this!
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Very good Joan, and Happy Birthday wishes to you Gregg. I enjoyed this very much. I will return again soon to read more.
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You have such a sweet spirit. The few times we have exchanged comments you have been so kind and angelic. Strangers aren't always so kind. You have sent your love beautifully with this acrostic. I see you are very good with them.
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a very beautiful birthday wish could not of been nicer said. It truely shows just how beautiful your soul is.
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Once again you are being your angelic self and spreading cheer to a beautiful soul. You are such a sweetie, and all who know your friendship is so blessed.
Best wishes in the contest.
S♠m
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A very good friend Bud, who is loved by so many poets here on AP, go read is story, how this man has battled wth the Aids Virus for over 20 years allpoetry.com/poets/lordoftherings
Thank you Budsy for your great comment~Lovesya~Joan
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Very well done. A friend or brother in canada? I like how you added the 2005 at the end. Very creative. ~Bud~
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Can you fed-ex this package to my house so I can open it up and receive all those . My
Aussie 
, even if it doesn't come Fed Ex, I felt everyone one of them while I was reading your beautiful acrostic penned. It is a bright sunny (but cold day) and I am preparing for the celebrations tonight where my friends will be joining and kidnapping me for something eventful this evening, I never know, every year it has been different. Personally, I think that is the reason for my depression, living so long on the daily basis that mortality is my reality. It's a hole that once you get swallowed up into, is difficult to get out, but with support like this, I must gather the strength to continue on, which as you know, I always meet the challenge, some days is more difficult than others. my sweet sister and I'll try and come back on tomorrow. Gregg
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Fantastic and creative acrostic here. I am glad to see someone attempt this form ( one of my faves ). I love the way you implimented his birthday instead of a name. Great job!!
Blessed be
~~Serenity~~
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Aww this is a great acrostic, I'm hoping to think of something for him too
Good luck in the contest and keep writing, this was lovely
All the best,
Pozo
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WOW! This is a spectacular birthday wish AND Acrostic. Very well done AAAJ. I'm certain that Gregg will feel the loving sentiment. Beautiful... -
Thank you Hugh for your Wonderful comment and your best wishes for Gregg on this his Birthday.
Love Bea
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Dear Joan,
This is surely the best birthday present anyone could send or receive, an avowal of true friendship and love, given in the way only you, with your huge heart, can give it.
I add my own best wishes to yours and my prayers to you Gregg for a release from your pain so that you can enjoy a happy celebration with your friends up there.
I wish I could be with you all. Enjoy. Applause to Joan with love and hugs,
Love and best wishesd to my buddy, Our Mutual Friend.
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