Reach for me,
in me,
around me
with hands that want to hold
and embrace-
want to make me feel the world
collapsing into them.
Undress me –
caress me
smoothly
into the oblivion
of that pink purple passionate haze.
Stroke me gently-
slowly
and meticulously
lifting me higher
with anticipation
of a moment too long
in the making.
Then drop me
from the edge of
“almost there”
into “My God.”
Catch me-
softly in hands
that want to hold
and embrace-
want to build
a world around me.
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Written March 11th, 2005
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this is really amazing...i dunno what to say..u left me speachless......keep it going
carmen- -
Zee is back!!! This is just beautiful - really passionate and really the stuff I am used to from you. Great work!
Scott
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wow! this is such a great poem! the imagery was ace and i think u wrote this really well. it was so beautiful and amazing. im gonna go read more of urs now
great job x x
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Excellent!
Wow! Wow! This is really good! The physical description is so good. This verse 'Undress me –
caress me
smoothly
into the oblivion
of that pink purple passionate haze' was so good. Lovely poem, keep up the good work. -
wow, this is beautiful..I think the best poem that I've ever read concerning making love..you explain it beautifully, and are the only person that I've seen describe it as an emotional expirience as well as a physical one. damn, this is good. keep it up.
luve,
sweethart xoxo
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