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Lay Me Down

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Lay me down and bury me.
Let me lie in the good green earth.
I will wait for my second birth.
Lay me down and bury me.

Lay me down; it's my time
I've done my work prepared for me.
Now I am ready to be set free.
Lay me down; it's my time.

Lay me down; let me rest.
I am weary and wasting away.
The night is near; gone is the day.
Lay me down; let me rest.

Lay me down; let me go.
I will not be far; no, I'll be near.
Do not weep and do not fear.
Lay me down; let me go.

Lay me down and bury me.
Lay me down; it's my time.
Lay me down; let me rest.
Lay me down; let me go.

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For those who have lost loved ones.
Written March 11th, 2005

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  • KarmasBlessing
    June 30, 2006
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    wow, this is perfectly timed for me.. personally speaking.
    my exboyfriend died two years ago tomorrow... i love this poem... dont you love it when you find writes that reflect upon your life? this was great.. keep it up!


  • queenie
    March 23, 2005
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    this is so peaceful and one can truly find much solace in it as no doubt blushful did.you are an uplifting soul and the world is a better place with you in it.


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    March 12, 2005
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    beautiful and inspirational~

    Oh sweetie
    It's beautiful.......just woke up
    I had to go to ER and fell alseep while I was there waiting for the shot to take effect, my b/p was really high and the Dr was super nice he said I was just under too much stress
    But comming here to read a poem you wrote for me made me smile so
    I am some better,still about half lit but better
    Thank you for this and for comming into my life and being a wonderful friend
    Yes I got the e-mail and the certificate too
    You are too good, and you penned this oh so well
    So many hugs
    Your loving friend always
    Susan~~~

    Edited on Mar 12 because 'errror~'.


  • Night Hope gold member
    March 11, 2005
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    It's beautiful, my Friend...Susan will love it...well done... Wanda


  • melphleg gold member
    March 11, 2005
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    Two things: The Song Lay Me Down ("Lay me down roll me out to sea...") and a dear friend who lost her mom.


  • Michael Schiewer
    March 11, 2005
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    Awsome!

    WOW!
    This is an awsome poem. It realy makes me think. Your style is great. I love the way it flows. I would realy like to know what was going through your mind when you wrote this. Great write.


  • TanyaB
    March 11, 2005
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    I'm sure that many will find solace in this simple poem. It leaves one feeling a sense of peace, maybe helping those that grieve to accept and let go.

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