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Sweet Annie(Haran)

With the stroke of her pen she creates beauty,
writing romance and fantasy with such flair,
sweet Annie always brings out the sunshine,
she is caring and loving this fine lady fair.

A stunning beauty with long brown tresses,
she has the biggest heart of gold around,
sticks by her friends through thick and thin,
her lengthy warm comments truly abound.

Starts out each morning with "How are you,
I hope your are  truly feeling fine today."
yes we would miss sweet Annie's smiles,
if she ever left and took her poetry away,

Her poetry is so filled with deep emotion,
exuding  such passion and love and desire,
Annie gives all her friendship so openly,
she shines as a beacon with an eternal fire.

Annie is always a wonderful caring  mother,
she is always a loving and endearing wife,
she is such a dear sweet friend on allpoetry,
she has brought such happiness into my life.

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Written March 11th, 2005

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  • Sandygram silver member
    March 29, 2005
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    Thank you so much for the lovely comment. This was a pleasure to write about my sweet frirnd Annie, Take care, Sandy


  • Maureen silver member
    March 29, 2005
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    Congratulations for winning the silver trophy in this contest!

    ♥ Maureen


  • Sandygram silver member
    March 13, 2005
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    Thank you so much Maureen for the wonderful comment. Ann is such a wonderful friend and poet. Take care, Sandy


  • Sandygram silver member
    March 13, 2005
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    Thank you for the wonderful comment on Ann's poem. She is such a wonderful person. It was such a pleasure to write about her.Take care, Sandy


  • Maureen silver member
    March 13, 2005
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    A wonderful tribute to a beautiful woman and great poet! I'm happy to know her through her poetry and comments to me.

    Good Luck in the contest!

    ♥ Maureen


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    March 12, 2005
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    excellent~

    This is a beautiful poem for my sis Annie
    She sent flowers to my home when my mom passed away a lovely gardenia plant, she is a wonderful poet, friend and sister..she is like a ray of light bringing smiles and laughter to me on a gray day
    Good luck in the contest I just penned one too but for all three
    Hugs n love
    Susan~~~


  • Sandygram silver member
    March 12, 2005
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    Thank you so much for the lovely comment. I appreciate it. Annie is a beautiful person and a wonderful friend to so many. Take care, Sandy
    Edited on Mar 13, 5:15 p.m. because ''.


  • Sandygram silver member
    March 12, 2005
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    Oh Annie, I meant everything I wrote here from my heart. I am blessed to know a wonderful friend like you. This was so easy to write because it is how I feel you truly are. God Bless you my friend. Take care, Sandy


  • masterblaster gold member
    March 12, 2005
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    Hi, wonderful write and it is so true she is a very lovely lady, all the best in the comp, a lovely write, hugs Di


  • March 12, 2005
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    Very touching!

    Sandy, you bring me to tears dear friend, this is so lovely, this can't be me You bring much joy to my life, your words touch my heart daily, your compassion, love of our Lord, your humor, just being you! Thank you my sweetest dear Sandy, may God bless you everyday and much happiness always, your heart is so kind... I did't know this contest was going on, just got the IM Totally surprised! Love you, Annie


  • Sandygram silver member
    March 12, 2005
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    Thank you pozo. I appreciate you always commenting on my poems. Yes Ann is such a sweet person. Hope all is well with you today.
    God Bless
    Take care
    Sandy


  • Sandygram silver member
    March 12, 2005
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    Wanda, thank you so much for the commet. Yes she is a true blessing to allpoetry. She is like a ray of sunshine here.God Bless. Take care, Sandy


  • Sandygram silver member
    March 12, 2005
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    Thank you for the lovely comment. I do hope Ann likes my poem. She is such a dear friend. Thank you for having this contest. I fixed the typos. I was tired last night. Take care, Sandy

  • pozo
    March 12, 2005
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    Aww this is a lovely poem Amazing tribute, this was wonderful Good luck in the contest
    Thanks for commenting on my poem
    All the best,
    Pozo


  • Night Hope gold member
    March 11, 2005
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    Yes, M'am!!! That's Annie my Girl, alright!!! Every single word...well done, sandygram!!! Thanks for loving Annie so well...she deserves it!!! Wanda


  • Lady Bird
    March 11, 2005
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    Yes, that is definitely Ann...she is such a lovely soul, full of love and light. The rhyming is very well done in this, and you have done an excellent job at describing this lovely lady. There are a few spelling mistakes, but those are easily fixed. Thank you for entering my contest, and good luck!

    -Emily

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