The love i feel for you has passed
the love i saw which i could not grasp
which i kept all inside
and even though i tried
it all fell apart
As you can see
of a time which belongs to me
which eventually will become a memory
of a time i tried so hard.
But now i see
we can still be friends
the love i felt for you is no more
i promise i ensure.
Lets carry on with are lives
until the end
and the love you never felt
the harshness that you dealt
we can still be friends.
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Written March 11th, 2005
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why dont u comment on any of my new poems anymore
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This is a great message. Though, in the first line of the last stanza I believe you meant "our" not "are". Good luck.
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amazing
Wow! That's so awesome. I love the way it's worded.. almost made me cry seriously!!!! good job!!! -
I think i know who dis is about. Common it doesnt take a genius! Gd write i hope u 2 can still b friends.
Luv
Maz -
I think i know who dis is about. Common it doesnt take a genius! Gd write i hope u 2 can still b friends.
Luv
Maz
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I think i know who dis is about. Common it doesnt take a genius! Gd write i hope u 2 can still b friends.
Luv
Maz -
who do u think its about
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rae who do u think this is about?? Luke who is this about??? This is a good write, very heartfelt and emotional.
Good write luke.
Dani -
aww bless i think i know who this is about and its nice to c u 2 talkin agen. gr8 peom nice expression
rae x x -
Ah my god
This is so deeep and emotional. Amazing poem Luke 
It deserves My applause
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