Butterflies flutter by
Nature's ballet dance
Bring pleasure to my eye
Heart and soul entrance
Nature's ballet dance
Flitting flower to flower
Heart and soul entrance
Growing hour by hour
Flitting flower to flower
With mesmerizing grace
Growing hour by hour
Beautifying my space
With mesmerizing grace
Bring pleasure to my eye
Beautifying my space
Butterflies flutter by.
Author notes
Written March 11th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- Food For the Eyes by ColourBlind.
450 points, ended February 13, 2006, 18 entries
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Very nice ...
and it's too bad you didn't read the rules. Poems must be punctuated.
Good luck with your writing the the future. -
Butterflies are a beautiful sight. Very well written, thank you for entering the contest. Good luck.
♥
whisper
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Lovely.
Thank you for your entry,
Best of luck. -
I just loved this beautifull Pantoum ... it was light ... it was pretty ... and it was beautifully penned ... Delightful to the eye ... and even more to the sould ... Very well done my dear ... and good luck in the contest ... Hope to see more from you ...
Much Luv
Sparkeh
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what a beautiful pantoum you had written here. such perfect rhymes you had done here with great flow, too! very delightful
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The form of the Pantoum was perfect for your delightful verse, the repeating lines gave it the feel of the butterfly really fluttering back and forth, Excellent work! Thank you for the great read tonight
Blessings
Sandi
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awww really good poem! absolutely loving the rhyme, beat and rhythm, it flows so natural and sounds amazing!! Really liking this, thank you for posting!
Maggie xxx -
You picked a perfect theme to go with this Pantoum. Refreshing and lighthearted. Well done! ~vj
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Very pretty. I like it.
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A great little poem, dedicated to a interesting bug! LOL
This had a great rhythmn and nearly flawless flow.
Such facination they bring out in us. And you displayed that well through out this piece. I loved our little dance.. -
This is a really great poem. You done great work. I really love how you wrote about butterflies. I love them. They are maraculous creatures. And you done a great job with this piece. Keep up the good work!
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I like this poem more than all here. I reallly like the ballet dance part. Great detail and indept wording. i like your stuff and keep it up :!
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Wow! As old as I am, I never heard of this type of poem before. This was impressive. It gave me something new to try,. I only hope I do as well. Now that I've started, I want to keep reading your work.
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