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Brok3n Inside

I sit on the end of my bed
Knife in my Left
Beer In my Right
Iam just staring into the mist.
Crying
I dont know what i should do
End my life.
Or drink it away.
Oh someone help me
Cant you tell
Behind my fake smile
Iam not ok.
I want to end my life
But not to hurt you
I want to drink away my life
But not to confuse you.
The Mist is starting to get wrost
I can feel the pain.
My heart and Soul are so
Brok3n Inside.
Iam sorry i chouldnt stop it
The Pain
The Sorrow
Took over my thoughts
I droped the Beer
just to listien to it Crash on the floor
I Looked at the knife just to see the blood
Iam So Brok3n Inside
Screaming for Help.

Author notes

I was Really Angry at my self one day. i was so full of pain and sorrow. I just chouldnt think.  

~!~Mia~!~
Written March 11th, 2005

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  • iamfromabove
    March 15, 2005
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    Sweetie we all feel so alone and hurt sometimes. I know I do but your life is worth living each one of us is very special. Keep your chin up. One day you'll have everything your heart desires. This was really raw with emotion. Mia

  • xoAngelFreakox
    March 11, 2005
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    I hope you don't mind if I bookmark this one...I really liked it. There is alot of emotion showed...awsome write. and I hope that you really don't do any of this!
    -Heather-

    I hope you write again soon!