Good morning sweetheart
It was so wonderful to see your face
I love it when you hold me close
Say I show no disgrace
You look at me sweetly
With you sympathetic eyes
I know you love me so much
And won't hurt me with silly lies
Your love is so pure
Your heart is so true
I love you so much
I know you love me too
Take my heart
Hold it and cherish it
Cuz you've softened this cold heart
That was once a careless pit
~march 8th~
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Written March 11th, 2005
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Thank you so much for reading this.
XOXO
~laura -
really awesome poem, very romantic,
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Thanks man!
XOXO
~laura -
i really like this.its a wonderful feeling to know that somebody loves you!great work!
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Love can make all the difference in the world..it makes everyday so wonderful to wake up to. It's good to know that you have this in your life...something we all need..for what is life without love?
Beautiful piece...Mike
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Thanks dearest josh. and chris is very lucky and happy. and you should be too to have my friendship!
XOXO
~laura -
awwwwwwwwww, so sweet. This is cute. I'm shure chris is a happy man.
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thanks again precious biker!
XOXO
~laura -
Yes sometimes i whisper my poetry and sometimes i scream! LOL
Thanks poetic soldier!
XOXO
~laura -
Thanks Thayla!
XOXO
~laura -
so lovely
so wonderful.... to say that in the morning.. afternoon and evening.. every minute of every hour of the day to the man you love.. till the end of time..
"I love you so much
I know you love me too
Take my heart"
so lovely... you are a very wonderful poet!
Hold it and cherish it
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excellent poem
you have such a way with discribing a very beautiful and special feeling. Love has the ability to do many things. It can hold you so close and fill your heart with warm wonderful feelings, it can embrace your soul setting it free to dance amoung the heavens. You write so very beautifully that all this flows as naturally as a whisper from your lips. Great writting. -
A really sweet story you told here. I really liked the last two line. A very true statement indeed. Well done
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Mum,
Thanks for reading and so happy you like my work.
XOXO
~laura -
Pozo
Thank you for reading my work and glad you enjoyed so much.
XOXO
~laura -
Doug,
Thank you for reading my poems and yes my sweetheart loves them. He reads them before i post them most of the time.
XOXO
~laura -
I love this Laura....you did so well in writing this one.
Your work just gets better and better...
Love ya dearie....
liz
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Aww this is such a sweet and romantic poem
Keep writing, this was a lovely write which I liked a lot
All the best,
Pozo
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Your love poems are so sweet and moving! Does your fiance like them? He'd better! lol
doug
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