Let me look into your eyes
And tell me how I feel
I put my finger to your lips
Yes baby this is real
Run my hands over your chest
Your heart's beating so fast
Kiss your lips so sweetly
Our love will forever last
Whisper dirty secrets in your ear
Tell you my wildest dreams
Don't think this is a dream baby
No matter how "dreamy" it seems
My lips will stay forever
Upon its heavenly match
Our hearts were once broken
But mended with a patch
I'll be by your side forever
No matter what the cost
As long as we're together
In this big world, I'll never feel lost
So now go off like a rocket
Into my inner space
And you'll see a satisfied look
Upon my wonderful face
And when it's all over
I'll lay upon your chest
To fall into a deep sleep
With the man I love the best!
~March 7th~
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Written March 11th, 2005
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Great write!
Awwwww! This is soooo cuuuute!
The last line tugged at my heart. "With the man I love best". That's so sweet!
Wonderful write!
And thank u sooo much for liking "Love's Hope" !!!
Love can't be celebrated enough
gypsybelle -
I loved reading this very much, i wish i had this feeling again...(except i'd have to change that last line a bit) (change man to woman) but you get the picture of what i'm talking about,,very amazing write
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Precious Biker,
Omg thank you for reading my work and leaving such a wonderful comment for me!
XOXO
~laura -
Poetic Soldier,
Thank you for saying I'm a talented writer.
XOXO
~laura -
Thank you for reading my work doug dear.
XOXO
~laura -
So good, so beautiful
wow.. beauty... beautiful words, lovely words.. just amazing..and yes indeed
"Our hearts were once broken
But mended with a patch
I'll be by your side forever
No matter what the cost
As long as we're together
In this big world, I'll never feel lost"
you know what.. that is what I am feeling recently.. that is what i want to express.. and you have it all in this poem.. and how can I not love this one.. when it reflects on my heart as well..
So good of a poem.. thank you so much for sharing.
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very beautiful
Something very sweet and beautiful. Your writting is very captivating. It holds the reader me in this case and starts to allow them to feel everythiing you whisper to them with each passing line. You are such a very talented artist.
Poetic Soldier -
Ahhhh, I love your humility! :-)
doug
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Doug,
Thank you and he knows he's lucky. And you are too to have my friendship so i'm not leaving you out!
XOXO
~Laura -
Awww, sweet, as your love odes are. He's a lucky guy!
doug
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