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Sam stinks

Sam smells like cheese
It makes me fall to my knees
One day she took a shower
The cleanness only lasted an hour
And once again I began to wheeze

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Yeah, it sucks. Oh well lol
Written March 11th, 2005

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  • DeathbytheQueen
    April 18, 2005
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    hehehehe, that's very cute! I wish I could write cute poetry like this! You made me smile, thank you.


  • Georgette
    March 20, 2005
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    Heh sweet. A very...fond portrayal of your friend. Loved it.

    Bella


  • Shiga
    March 13, 2005
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    Lol thx and I'm glad you enjoyed it!

    -April

  • Shiga
    March 13, 2005
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    Glad I could be of service lol Glad you liked it!

    -April

  • Shiga
    March 13, 2005
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    Thx so much! I really apprecite it!! ^-^

    -April

  • Shiga
    March 13, 2005
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    Glad you liked it Cuz lol thx!

    -April


  • Shiga
    March 13, 2005
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    Lol we just beam with friendshippy love don't we lol the insults just keep coming


  • punkrocksmidge
    March 12, 2005
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    I LOVE YOU SOOOOO MUCH, APRIL!! ...but truth be told, you smell like monkey butt *hobbles off to write insulting poem of my own*

    ~Smidge~


  • Autumn Raine
    March 12, 2005
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    your so funny shiga so writings always makes me laugh

    ~Mercy


  • peluche
    March 11, 2005
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    This was sooo funny. I loved it. I really needed a good laugh and you supplied it. Good work on this


  • March 11, 2005
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    Yeah, I agree, I thought it was cute, I rather enjoyed it myself... great work April, hope all is going well, Annie


  • SexyAngel0418
    March 11, 2005
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    LOL... This is really cute... It is so funny... It made me laugh ...

    Hugs,
    Beth

  • Shiga
    March 11, 2005
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    Lol thx aunti Jess!! *gigantic hug* I loved the radio edit =P

    -April

  • Mrs. Dumas silver member
    March 11, 2005
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    Hey, this doesn't suck....it's actually kind of funny. And you know what, if anyone says it sucks, just let me know and I will kick their *radio edit*. LOL!

    Hugs
    Auntie Jess

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