Colin thinks he's better
Once I wrote him a letter
All about my feelings
As my anger had reached the ceiling
He always makes me cry
And yet never understands why
I feel he is a bully
Not understanding me fully
I want to be part of their family
All living so happily
But I'm not part of this
And this is what I miss
Author notes
Crappy i no but true
Written March 11th, 2005
A contest entry
- Father Figure by Prince Charming.
300 points, ended May 21, 2005, 21 entries
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Very strong said. But it so very good to write a letter and just tell him your feelings. You want to be a part of the family You want to be understand. You want a place you can be yourself and reveal your feelings and emotions. That needs understanding from both sides. Never give up keep on talking
Hugs Herman -
I had a nice rhyme but u obviously wanted it to rhyme, he always seemed so nice when i saw him! i guess it's just an act! good poem sam!
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He's a bully? I don't get it, but the unclearness makes it a poem I guess. Try to make it more clear if you want people to undertsnad it.
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Wanted it to rhyme!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so there
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Poems dont have to rhyme u know. But i get how ur feeling . Ignore de idiot.
Luv
Maz
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