Betty my beloved
Saying goodbye to Betty
broke my heart into pieces,
she is very trendy
always gave her kisses.
I see her driving in town
bips as she passes me
she always acts a clown!
Oh she looks so pretty.
Is she happy without me?
or Tara does she envy ?
There’s only one Betty.
she’s so very sexy.
If you haven’t guessed yet
I’m talking about my car!
Often drove to Sunset
just don’t think I’m bizarre.
I know it’s only a car
she meant everything to me
Tara is now my star
cause she is my baby.
I pray Betty will be safe
as she drives around the Hill
a very fiesty waif
who lives in Broken Hill.
I love you Betty
don't forget me.
Author notes
Awwww Til Betty will be fine, you'll see her around the Hill
Written March 10th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- A Prayer For "BETTY" by Am8ur.
350 points, ended March 25, 2005, 4 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Have never felt this way about a car before, a home maybe...Easy to read and understand - nicely done.
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HA HA HA HA You're a funny man shubs and have worked the words in well. my poem drives you crazy!
Thanks for reading it.
your admirer Jenn. -
Fantastic
Hey after reading your wonderful muse I must comment that You have got the drive!
And the Betty goes to Monte Carlo..or was it Herbie..any which way you look at it your poem drives me crazy..hehehehe cheers Shubs
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Hey thanks Vic, it was a great poem to write for a friend who loves her car, WOW your Mum must get frustrated with you, hoarding everything Lovesya Jenn
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5 stars *****
oh dear.. this was a wierd poem.. because.. it was something written for whom we luv.. not a person.. gee.. i have very deep personal attachment to non-living things.. my mum alwasy shouts at me.. but my room is completely filled with non-living but my loved things.. my rooms getting more dirty day by day.. i still keep the pens with which i used to write 6 years before.. i dont know why... but its just within me.. this is a nice poem.. gee. i liked it.. personal touch.. personal touch of my shade.. good work.. keep it up dear jenni.. take cares and have a nice time... your humble little friend..
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... ... - vic ( who else?)
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You'll have til rushing back to get Betty saying she is sexy. This was wonderful Jenn it really made me giggle. All the best luck. Mia
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this was soooooo cool. loooooooove it! great job. thanks for the entry. i looooooooooooved the imagery!
til
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