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A Lonely Love

My loneliness is beginning to sink in
Slowly but surely, I can feel it.
I feel like I am suffocating,
Slowly falling apart.

Where can i turn to help this?
Who can I tell that will relieve this feeling.
The burning in my heart grows stronger,
With every thought of the love I lack.

I can not be relieved of this curse,
This curse of loneliness
Until you come and rescue me
And I will wait, until you come.

Author notes

well i dont really feel like this that much, but it helps to write so i did. lol
Written March 10th, 2005

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  • Wandering Star
    July 4, 2005
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    great write macey! I love it... Thanks for commenting on my new ones! Its pretty fun! haha... Well. i love you lots!!
    Camilla

  • blink-and-tear
    March 11, 2005
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    macey! i love this poem!!! this is very very good! the last stanza is definitely my favorite! it sums it all up and brings it to a good close! nice job! i'm so glad you wrote!

    love ya!

    -brae