life after death
then what would it bring?
will it bring pain, sorrow, burning life as in hell?
or would it be competely dark as a candle without light?
What would it be like after life after death?
Would there be demented demons, devils ruling this new world of ours?
Will it be all of us just burning in madness
Or would it be lots of sorrow and pain?
Will our hearts explode with tender and actually bleed to death as nothing happened
Will the pain just go away, or will it never STOP!
will people die in misery and with fury of thinking of burning?
What will the future look like as we move on.....
I bet i know what it would look like.......
IT WILL REMIND US OF HELL!
will the world actually just freeze over?
and the flames would get higher and higher?
What would happen to the little creatures?
Would we still be alive....Or would it just get darker and darker with no light in our system?
Will people thank us for the world of hatred or in fury.....
Whatever it is.....This world that we live in can be really bad as time goes by!
This is only the beginning of a WHOLE NEW WORLD!
Without this madness go away....will we be crazy enough to live in this world.
Or will the madness get worse after sunset falls?
Will the truth behind our eyes will go into fury and into pain!
Author notes
i did this poem of hatred!
Written March 10th, 2005
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Brilliance TRUE GOLD.
~Hello midnightcreature ~
Thank you so kindly for inviting me in to read you grace and your harmony.
The title of your song pulled me right in. This is the one i had to read immediately.” life after death” is one of my all time favorite subjects. Moreover, for one so young you have shown such brilliance in your old old soul. Once upon the time i had the grace to study with Dr. Elizabeth Kubler Ross, she is the author of many books on "Death and Dying". I must sing to you, your song is powerful and stunning in the seas of passion and pain. Keep penning your songs for all of us. You have deep insights beyond just this life. ~Namaste Blessed Be, all the best to you and yours family, Sharron~
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yay ^.^ Its so sad..Kepp up the good work
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