Your extraordinary to me in so many ways
So many affectionate words I wish to say
Sweetly reminiscing of days long past
All of my wildest dreams you surpass
Entranced in a passion that flames my soul
Con-caving in I lose all control
Melting away in ecstasy's sin
Spinning in a whirlwind of emotions within
Deep in fantasy I'm complete
My exotic heat
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something new I have not posted in a while...thought I'd try a love poem or something...lemme know what you all think
Written March 10th, 2005
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Wow I like this....
Melting away in ecstasy's sin
Spinning in a whirlwind of emotions within
Deep in fantasy I'm complete
My exotic heat
this is hot....erotic if you will. I love this. This has really become my fav. sort of write. thanks for this. -
It got to the point, and I like that because some times people just drag it on and on...like me some times
You seem like a very strong writer.
-BxBxBx -
OMG ! ! I love it. short sweet and simple.......
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I'd like to see a part 2 or expansion of this. I think with just a little bit of tweaking it has the makings of a dang good song..
-Eddy -
Short, Sweet
This was a good, short piece. I enjoyed it. I thought it ended a little blunt, however it was still a good piece. There was rhyme and a bit of meter. Great job! Keep it up!
<3 Razor
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