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Why does it hurt so bad

If I am over you then whyu does it hurt so bad?
Never ever have I had such pain.
Everytime I think I'm out...
I'm back in love with you
Why does it hurt so bad
I can't help but be in love with you.
All the pain is worth all the plesure.
Why does all this pain hurt so bad?
I though I was over you but maybe I'm not.
Next day I'm right baxk with you.
Even though I know your not for me
I read past what my mind says
Why does this hurt so bad??
Maybe I am a fool
To feel the way I do



       THIS POEM GOES OUT TO:
         CHEYNA AND ROB
      I hope yall are happy and I love you both

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Written March 10th, 2005

A contest entry

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  • HeavenonEarth
    April 21, 2005
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    I think this was entered in the wrong contest hon. I commend you for expressing your feelings through this poem though. Your feelings can be felt.


  • April 11, 2005
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    good


  • Raiderbaby
    April 11, 2005
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    I think so too lol.


  • keelyray
    March 14, 2005
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    LOL I think she put it on by accident i dont know though


  • applepie1254
    March 14, 2005
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    yeah- this contest is supposed to be about your BROTHER...dude this was sooo wrong! lol omg... this is so messed up

  • keelyray
    March 10, 2005
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    I am sorry i dont understand this poem can you please explain this to me??


  • -jme-
    March 10, 2005
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    heh!! yeah buddi! I love you to gurl and u better know it..and rob loves you! MUAH!


  • -Tainted- LOoVe
    March 10, 2005
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    AWE IT GOES OUT TO ME AND MY BOY! cause we do that! hahah! I love you Jess!
    You my home skillete!

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