Running around till no end
Trying to keep up with every end
But with Winter just making it weary
Time for a break
Just for a day if possible
Time to go for a drive
Maybe even for a ride
Needing that break from everything
Just tired of doing everything
Taking in time to rest
Time to relax your mind today
No homework at the moment
Just let me breathe in this moment
Needing that break just to relieve the tension
Just needing that one little break
Renewing myself in these times.
Author notes
Interesting. Lol I like it but right now I'm in a weird mood, so i hope you like. ---E. Rajamala aka Shadow Child.
Written March 10th, 2005
A contest entry
- Cure My Winter Blahs! by swiftlyblue.
500 points, ended March 10, 2005, 7 entries
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You are so right...we all need breaks from time to time. I think that we tend to get tired of the Winter season. I long for the sun to break through and just rejuvinate the ole body. Nicely penned, dear Poet.
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I know that feeling and i will say that i need a break to day and for the next few days but as it seems to be now the only way i will get a break is if i take an extended stay at the happy hotel and from reading this chris you have gotten your writting thingy back good job and i like this its more up beat than you have been being
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I would LOVE to have that break right now. But I'm in Iowa, and it just snowed/sleeted/rained ALL BLEEPING DAY LONG!!!!
Sorry about that, hon! Just THIS tired of all the snow!
for Emily
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I here ya! What I would do for that one little break...
I'm taking my final exams while trying to take care of my knew puppy and do chores around the house, so I know EXACTLY what you mean when you say your 'just tired of doing everything!'
Great write!
~Kate
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