flowers of love ....(haiku)
the beauty of love
reflected in the flowers
our love shining through
Dee Garner
October 10, 2002
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Written October 11th, 2002
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Bravo! This is stunning. I love the vibrancy of this piece, it's so uplifting and really makes me smile. Love is to us as sunshine is to nature. We need it to survive.
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I love flowers!
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Beautiful
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Great Job!
oooooooooooo granna now this was so good...I loved this Haiku. U did wonderful...
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This is lovely catz, I like it a lot, and such a beautiful picture to go with it, well done! Keep up the good work
best wishes as always
Moonstone Virgo
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Wonderful Haiku. Love, such a universal topic with an unending inspiration for cognition
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Love is always a perplexing experience to be at hand, such a shattered and chaotic way to be always like mice scattering around trying to keep two people whole, always, just always hoping for more.
I think this is a great haiku. Well done and thank you for liking my poem enough to bookmark it. I am honored.
much love,
James
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precise bite.
Very deep if you read the message.
I would add, the flowers of this earth are but a poor shadow of those in heaven...I still want to wait though! -
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Flowers are so symbolic... they can represent love, beauty, innocense, in the case of the daffodil, youth, and the chrysanthimum, maturity, it is amazing! -
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This is cute. -
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The beauty of you
so fragrant like the lilacs
your petals so soft
beautiful Catz :)
your background reminds me of my mom too, she loved flowers and kept her garden up til about 3 weeks before she died. she had so many beautiful flowers. Thank you for the memory
Jen -
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What a dip I am tonight forgot to leave a comment for my sweet mom. I love it the background and poem too so awesomely beautyful just like you.
The beauty of love
reflected in the flowers.
I love those verses there. -
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Mom if you want you can add the poem to the pretty paper. and the pages or in the meemory book already I will be using acid free glue for memory books to glue the poems and pictures in place. I will probaly be putting frames made by me from pretty paper too. I will need all acid free things,so as not to damage the pictures. -
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beautiful but almost hard to read with the background, but hey what do i know... luv ya woman.. Lee -
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Again, a beautiful haiku.
~Jennifer~ -
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Mmmmmmmm...makes me almost smell the bloom of love's kiss. Lovely, Dee. Lovely. ~ joyce -
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i'm not much one for haiku, i find them boring a lot of the time. but i think this one really accomplishes what hiakus are meant to be. i like it -
Thanks everyone for your kind comments.
About the last line... I guess some consider 'our' as two syllables... I never did, and as Rubee said.. maybe it's all in the pronounciation. I pronounce it as one syllable but I have heard many other people pronounce it as what could be considered two syllables...
but hey...lol... it's my haiku...lol so I can pronounce it with one, can't I??!!
Luv ya all
Dee
Edited by catz on Oct 12 because 'spelled something with one syllable and it should have been two...lol'. -
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catz, your work amazes me. You can paint a whole canvas with just a handful of words. You have get style and so upbeat and encouraging. I always look for new things by you. Althogh I still don't know how you get all the bases in your life covered.
Another wonderful background! I still haven't tried the webshots yet. Week was on the tough side! Can't keep a mustang down!
Your poetry is so ver unique..... -
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awesome write...the one you commented on of mine, was about me....anyway, you can really say a lot with a very few words. -
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a beautiful write
thanx for shairng -
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absolutely lovely Dee!! I was counting the syllables too, I think it's all in how you might pronounce 'our'...I got 5...a beautiful haiku!!! :)) -
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short sweet straight to the point and just so beautiful! a very nice Haiku -
oops... got the 2nd and 3rd lines switched..thanks, Norman. It's 5-7-5 though, and I count that? hmmm ....6? sorry, can't see the six...I still count them as 5-7-5
Dee
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That last line is six syllable's.
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