Confined
Shackled within
Gasping for air
Imprisoned in my body
Incarcerated
Author notes
Written March 9th, 2005
A contest entry
- My Contest by KissMyEyes.
350 points, ended March 20, 2005, 5 entries
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Darkly awesome lol
WOW DARKNESS!!! SHORT AND DARK ME LIKEY!!!
Sara -
Dark! I always liked the dark stuff. Great vocabulary...sums up being confined in words that are confined!
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Oooooo! I like this!!! It's very short, and sweet. Although, I'm not certain about the sweet part, as in candylicious. =/ LOL This is really good. In only five lines, you have really summoned up traped, imprisoned, as you already said. I love this poem. great job!
~Satan~
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