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C.h.r.i.s

Caring eyes staring up at me from a cozy bed
Holding me so close so I won't be cold tonight
Relaxing my every muscle so I'll sleep well
Insisting that you need just one more kiss to fall asleep
Sensing love in the air so I bid you goodnight

~March 8th~

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Written March 9th, 2005

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  • DevilsWrongHand
    March 10, 2005
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    Thank you soldier for reading another of my poems. Thank you!

    XOXO
    ~laura


  • Airborne Ed silver member
    March 10, 2005
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    A very beautiful Acrostics Poem. It sings with the love and respect that you hold for your sweet Chris. You honour him in such a special way with each line of your poetic heart. You did a wonderful job discribing such a wonderful feeling of love.
    Poetic Soldier

  • DevilsWrongHand
    March 10, 2005
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    Miseryzcompany,
    What does this make you wish...please feel free to share with me.
    XOXO
    ~laura

  • DevilsWrongHand
    March 9, 2005
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    nice write

    Thank you again my dear doug for reading my things. Thank you much.
    XOXO
    ~laura


  • Watuwant silver member
    March 9, 2005
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    Very lovely! Acrostics are fun, are they not?
    Good job!
    doug


  • miseryzcompany
    March 9, 2005
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    very good..sweet...and loveing...makes me wish..........

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