Standing beside myself,
looking within my heart.
A nothing beckons while,
nowhere seems to fade.
Feeling within myself,
a pity and a doubt.
Truth is hidden by,
unwillingness to change.
Seeing outside myself,
begging for a chance to feel.
Aiming self loath,
away from inner night.
Trying to buy myself,
an attempt to steal a hint of bliss.
Feeling both sides and,
once again choosing wrong...
As usual...
Author notes
Darkness - corrupting all in its path
Greed leading the man to blindness, suffering
And ever foretold...the meek shall have this earth
Alas without sight they will only be left with demise
-Morbid Angel- \
Written March 9th, 2005
A contest entry
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350 points, ended April 2, 2005, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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sweet
This is a very beautiful poem. It has great emotion and reminds me of how I feel sometimes. Please keep up the great work and thanks for sharing.
crysolia -
this is good! i really enjoyed reading it, for some reason i feel i can really relate to it, i'm not quite sure how yet, but in someway i can...haha but anyway, awesome job, thanks for following the rules and good luck in the contest!
:::love always:::
melodie
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