Dream of mystical places
Reaching for the crystal ball
Eyes searching for answers
Appearing in your mind
Mesmerising your senses.
Watching for each vision
Entering your dream state
Appearing before your eyes
Visons of symbolic signs.
Each one rising above to
Rites of magic performed.
Author notes
The picture is called Dream Weaver
Written March 8th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- Spell Out by AngelicDemon.
300 points, ended July 30, 2005, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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wow... this poem possesses such a mystical feel and is so well written it makes one wonder.... about so much.. the choices we make... the direction our lives are guides.... nicely done
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Thanks Gregg for your wonderful comment, I had fun writing it
Love you Bro, Love~Joan
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This has such a mystical and mythological feel to it as you read it. A simplistic write in the diction, but profound in its meanings. A supberb write Joan, sometimes you just draw me into these acrotics and I have a hard time finding my way out. gregg
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A really lovely acrostic which fits the picture perfectly. Well done and good luck in the contest.
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My dearest auntie Joan, you are always one to pen such beautiful acrostics. I am so afraid of this form. I have attempted it many times but am rarely pleased with the pathetic outcome. This is fabulous! Good luck in the contest.
♥ Kimberly -
This has such a sweet and easy feel about it. I really enjoyed reading this one.
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Acrostics are one of my most favorite forms of poetry Joan and you have written this one with a wondrous ethereal flavor. Oh My! I feel like I am floating on air after reading this. Very nicely penned. Good luck in the challenge!
Your sister/friend
Renee ♥ 
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Joan, this is great; I loved it from beginning to end. It was truly great.
Damon D. Brewer -
This is a beautiful acrostic sis
Love the pic and the background just adds to the ambience of the poem
Good luck in the contest and I got up a new one too
Love ya muchly
Your sis
Susan~~~
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Hi aunt Joan,
Thanks so much for sharing, and taking us along into a mystical journey. This is a sweet piece, full of peace and joy.
Love,
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Dear Bea,
You are excused for not rhyming this one coz acrostics don't have to rhyme and you did a really good job of capturing the essence of the picture and of a weaver of dreams.
Confhughcius say: "Weaver of Dreams make fragile fabric."
A very beautiful vision. Let us dream together Bea. Applause.
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this was awesome.. I think I will do something for this contest..
Yvonne
Good luck my dear friend.
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This is so beautiful. I love a well written acrostic and this is just that. It reads so smoothly into each line. Beautiful work!!
S♠m
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Dear Joan, this is a very good acrostic, I love anything mystical and this is great, the pic and background, they're terrific-Jenn
Good luck.
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nice poem liked it a lot again welldone
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Great piece, hun... Well done, well done indeed..
Good luck in the contest...
Pat
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