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A Tangible Release

A maelstrom of sentiments
thrashes within the confines of an empty shell
bearing a revolting feeling
that’s been pressed to quell

I desire to split with laughter,
and vociferate until my lungs combust
Like the tempest winds that sound outside
to be heard by all the world,
a very gravid hope

I want to wallow in euphoria,
and linger on the sorrow
that reminds me of the elliptic stratus
suppressing a wondrous vista of overt sky
encompassing all but one section, narrow

I wish to plunge from the face of the earth,
and mirror the precipitation that cascades from the sky
To be caught by the sultry torrent of molten sediment
within the earth’s heart, to breathe
away from distress

These things I express,
and the regard for my problems to lie
as a tangible release
My physical sigh

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Written March 8th, 2005

A contest entry

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  • sweetheart4rain
    March 8, 2005
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    that was great!..i luved it!..your words are so interesting..keep up your great poems


  • DarlingStac
    March 8, 2005
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    this was AMAZING!o my gosh..that was so good.. your words.. omg.. i have word fetish..lol..it was like a orgasm reading it lol.. im weird sorry..but that was so good.. keep up the great work... loved it... xoxo stac