Do you ever look at your wrist
And think about grabbing that
Knife on the table and just slice them?
Do you just want to grab those
Sleeping pills next to the nightstand and
just want to over dose?
Did you see a high cliff and think
'I want to jump' and then climb to
that cliff thinking 'I'm gonna fly like a
bird and be free'
Ever see that gun your father hid?
Wanting to grab it and take out your anger
or better yet, end your suffering.
Do you like the element of water?
Always felt calm watching it,
Then thinking it'd be nice to go with something you love.
Or maybe someone you hate is the person
Your going to take to hell with you.
Making them suffer for all the suffering they caused you.
But maybe you want to make a spectacle of yourself.
Letting others know that they hurt you.
Lucky for you, you don't think these thoughts
Do you?
*You aren't there everyday, but I am.*
Author notes
"Good Bye"
Written March 8th, 2005
I guess this can be option 2...tho I go through this every few months...I can't say it is something I over came yet. Hope you like it!
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300 points, ended June 30, 2005, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
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wow
wow that is really dark, very sad, anything wrong?
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Poems like this one make me cry..
I cry tears that I really don't understand..
Whether its sorrow, knowing other people feel this way too,
Or relief, knowing I'm not the only one.....
Thank you, in any case...
I really like this poem.
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i ask my self these questions too. it has been a lot more latley because of everything going on.
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holy crap...I like it =)
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Thank you.
Makes me smile to know some people like what I penned in an emotional state.
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haha lol
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this is a really powerful poem
I love the last lines and you have articulated this emotion in a way that some can only dream of
great write and good luck in the contest!
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Thank you, was feeling really down that day. Thoughts just kept pouring out, what can we say but the truth speaks? Your comment made me smile. Again thanks!
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I liked the questioning aspect of it. It was very good and very true to the heart. I go through this almost every day adn just loved it. It spoke true and close to me. Great write and best of luck
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Wow... Kystal, my love, you are fully-deserving of that other gold shiny thing you have here! Although I'm not really into the whole wrist-slashing emo thing, your amazing words made it seem a lot less emo...
I loved it, and I love you more 
Good luck in the contest!
♥ Laura x
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AMAZING WRITE!!!! one of the best i've seen yet!
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Thankyou for entering my contest good luck x
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written very well. the emotion is seen very clearly through this and you did a great job writing it. well done. thnx for entering and good luck
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DAMMMMMMN...... AWESOME JOB!!!!
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GREAT JOB> AMAZING OUTCOME
This was an amazing poem. I will definately be coming back to this one when I do the judging. Great job. Good luck in my contest. -
wow...this is so deep and thought provoking...at least for me it is! LOVE the closure, great way to end such a powerful piece! good job and good luck
Meg
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Wow! Thats all I can say!
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awesome
you should get first.. of course i havent read any other ones but this one is very very deep and well.. it's true. i'm facing a very tough time in my life right now and i have slit my wrist with the knife on the table and yeah.. you tell it like it is
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Deep. It was a bit off when it came to flow, but personally I could care less. It seems that this write was focussed more on reality than poetry, and it's beautiful and disgusting in its truth. Many people don't realize how bitter reality can actually be--and those who do, hate it.
Good job--you explained millions of people's emotions in one, short poem.
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Wow...it's like you were looking at me. So many people deal with this, but never admit it. Like it's some crime. A great write.
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Thanks!
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this lil crazy..... i kno wut u mean here 2............ o wow this is a really strong right i had 2 applaud
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Probably, more people can relate to this than would like to admit to it. I think you captured these dark thoughts rather poetically, and lately I'm right there with you. Good Job.
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