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agony from within

distraught and in disbelief
pain filling from within my heart
the feeling of my stomach dropping

the sudden rush
of the blood leaving my face
draining from me

sitting in shock
not wanting to believe
what is the truth

knowing i'm the reason
eats the inside of me away
i struggle to fight off tears

feeling dizzy and disconnected
i regain my composure
and attempt to be strong

hold you in my arms
so glad you're still here
and that you didn't depart

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Written March 7th, 2005

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