Come to me
the darkness waits for the union
of the past ancient ways
kept alive
the blessing awaits us
Let the music of forever
dance inside your soul
take me...
wrapped in chants
and lie with me in the new tomorrow
You live in me and
I shall live in you
a ghost of power
so rise from the sleep
that keeps you bound
to this world
We will bear the beauty of ages
and breathe the winds upon the earth
let's ride the storms of change and
run with the tides of oceans wild
Listen closely now
my blood pours out
a romantic gift to my other
blended with you i shall live again
darkness my gown
and i will spin magick for you
We are loved
by each other
forever
past time
to never die
in human tear filled eyes
our eyes remain bright
yet they will never see
another sunrise
Come be with me
Forever in eternity
Author notes
Written October 9th, 2002
In a list
A contest entry
- ~VAMPIRES~ by XMysticalNightmareX.
650 points, ended November 24, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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very beautiful, one of the best poems i have read today! so dark and romantic, thank you so much for entering this contest! you are very talented!!! good luck in the contest
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Once again, GREAT. This time I feel as if I am wanted by a vampire. Wierd I know. smiles The words seem to speak right to the soul. very powerful. I am hooked.
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Wow this is beautiful. I lvoe the flow and choice of words. Great write!
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Very Great poem very nicly done good job.
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God I LOVE vampire tales! This was simply beautiful. It leaves me filled with a dark longing...ah yes...
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You go girly with the vamp writes~Love this very much and look forward to more~Keep them coming~ I love it~ Big hugs
and much love~Desire
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Smiling in the night
where darkness touches
thy crimson tears...
and the howl of the moon is heard!
I did enjoy!
Keep penning on my friend!
Bill -
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Omg. There is nothing I can say that hasn't already been said but this was just amazing. I am always astounded by the way you write and this has been no exception..this was wonderful. -
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Susan, you have such a way to make something so dark and evil seem so beautiful, I love the way you do that and can only hope that I will be able to do the same some day...... -
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I want to join a mystery religion, Eleusinian maybe...
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excellent
wow. gorgeous. gothicly romantic. -
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I didn't think it possible but the poem does the picture justice. I love it I am always in the mood for a creapy and haunting pice. and there definatly the style now that ahlloween has rolled around. -
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very nice. beautiful picture( the eyes are so real, full of life.)and words to match, i've always been a fan-o-the blood suckers. the mythical kind anyway. if being a vampyre was an option would you be one?
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Thank you for the nice comment on my own poem. This, in my eyes, is a dark piece spinning its mystifying web to ensnare the senses. Happy bitings, er...writings. ^w^
~J-chan~ -
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I love the picture!! It fits the mood quite nicely, AND I love the way you flowed this... a dark brooding love that lasts all time... great writing! Kudos! -
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hehe gotta love that pic :D Nice write btw I liked your previous ones better though. :) -Brandon -
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nicely done
great read!!
~*~adriana~*~ -
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cool picture...for some reason this was so sensual to me. it's so intense. Awesome! -
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Your work is amazing.... flexibility of your talent is awesome to say the least....... -
excellent
Fearing not the Moon that guides thirst, but, the Sun that takes the thirst away. -
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What a lovely horror story. I always enjoy the dark side even
tho you guys try to keep me in inspirational mode. I have been
a fan of horror shoes ever since I saw my very first one. I used to have a big collection of the old Creepy and such mags.
They would be worth millions if I still had them today. I can across the very first horror magazine I ever read when I lived
down in StPete Florida right before the x and me moved back to North Dakota. I had recently been in an auto accident and with the moving, doctors and such I forgot to make it back over and
buy it. I wonder if it's still there after all these years.
It was about mole people and stuck in my head as a child, what with Journey to the center of the earth and such being around that time too.
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Thanks so much for your comments all of you
Susan~~ -
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hmm cool woman (the picture)
he he
this is nicely written, blushfulmoon
thank you for sharing -
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wow...intense poem- great work...................debie -
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lol i hate it when i find things like that lol -
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Woooooooo}}} What a great picture too!...Perfect poem where Halloween is coming right up!!...What a beautiful vamping write hehe Love your dark side Bushful*....Hugs & Smiles CaUsAL...:*) -
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hypnotic and hauntingly beautiful...love it
blessing, daoine... -
Thanks KnightLady
this was an older write i had came across while cleaning out a drawer full of papers (LOL)
Susan~ -
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omg this was awsome i luv'd the pic also
~liz~
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