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stab turn

stab turn
twist burn
my skin
it brakes
my fears they ake
stolen knife
my whole life
give it back
heart's empty sack
burn to learn
turn the burns
so if you please not tell
i need my knife in hell

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Written March 7th, 2005

A contest entry

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  • nobodys-girl
    May 31, 2007

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    this is so very interesting and i loved it! thankyou so very much for entering my contest and best of luck to you!