Perfect Lies,
In twines,
A perfect mind,
and turns,
it into,
something,
Unrecognisable,
Perfect Knife,
Perfect Red,
Shining,
On her bedsheets
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She hides it,
Not even her eyes,
Release,
Shes has a degree,
In playing Hide. . .
. . .And killing the seeker in a Kiss chase.
Her perfect mind,
Decomposed.
Her perfect lie,
Is Her Krimson Fault,
Lie.
Author notes
I was depressed.
Ok. . .sorry for the shitty angnst
Written March 7th, 2005
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Again, great, original structure. You're naturally great at this, however brilliant your piano-playing guy seems to you, one day someone will see the incredible beauty of your talents. I promise.
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Its cool, dont worry if its your angst, we all understand so dont apologise. Great poem you rock, love the
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its cool. well done keep posting more. your poems rule. -
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wow....this is a really powerful poem...it is full of so much sadness...i really hope you are okay...i'm here for you if you need to talk. I love the way you wrote this and it is a brill poem. Keep up the good work. -
this is awesome, i love the layout as well... brilliant piece, keep it up. if you need to talk, ill listen
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why were you depressed sweety? good write. xXx
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