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Under The Sky So Blue

Let me take your hand.
I promise i won't hurt you like before.
Let me show you the power of your command.
Let me show you the life you adore.
Let this warmth comfort you,
Embrace you in it's tranquility
As you lay under the sky so blue.
Burning up in it's glowing effigy.
Without wings still soar
Through sweet air and thought,
This empire of yours to explore.
This idyllic treasure it brought
To you from within.
No pain, no more.
Here, there is no sin,
No pain, no grief, no war.
Open your forever closed eyes
And still this Eden will unfold.
Whereupon the green you may lie
And let your happiness create its mould.
Where minutes may have passed,
Hours have really rolled by.
Though there is no 'too fast',
Nor questions of wonderment, 'why?'
There is nothing missed,
No waste, no regret.
For this is all there is.
A treasure to be kept.
In it's moment's birth
Wishing this idleness to last,
This elixir is not found on this Earth
Or wherever His stare may have been cast.
It's a world within your self.
Where your beauty is what you breathe,
What you create is your wealth.
Together you and i, this Eden we can weave.

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Written March 7th, 2005

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  • Moo
    March 8, 2005
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    cheers, ya big girl-pants.

  • Pater Sin
    March 7, 2005
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    Welcome back, moocow.


  • theprodigalsister
    March 7, 2005
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    "Together you and I, this Eden we can weave."

    Amazing final line my dear... Great imagery throughout.