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abuser

in the shadows i live and hide
Forgetting my will and pride
I can see through you
wish you could see me to
over and over i am here
fighting every little fear
when you see me i will be okay
a eternity i await that day

you choose to see my shell
never inside, im not well
i suffer a broken heart
one that just wont start
i suffer a broken mind
cause this life is not kind

i am swallowed by the user
the one and only abuser
used for nothing
i want just something
some affection in this world
a day for it to be pearled
i am always here
i shelter you from the tear
but i cant heal you
you cant heal me to

i am swallowed by the user
the one and only abuser
used and molested by the mind
nothing is ever kind
i cant run i am close
near it i am to pose
just to shelter you from pain
and more pain i can only gain

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Written March 7th, 2005

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  • ItLiesWithin
    May 5, 2006
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    You just keep amazing me! You are such an amazing writer! I love this line "cause this life is not kind" I feel this way every other day. Life is such a nasty beyatch and things go wrong every day it simply sucks. Keep writing, keep laughing, keep smiling

    Always,
    IT


  • Pretty Disaster
    March 21, 2005
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    this was great..good job, I like how you repeated that one verse..it made the piece flow really well..awesome job!
    --Rochelle


  • requiempoet gold member
    March 7, 2005
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    awwwwwwwww baby I love you you're so beautiful and you sound so cute on the phone! Great great poem!


  • Niki1227
    March 7, 2005
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    Another wonderfull job from you I felt your pain and know it my self all too well Keep your head up hun Till next time todles Niki