I live in his world of wonders
This is where I can breathe
In his world I escape from all
Take all of time to teethe
For his world is wonderland
A never-ending fairy tale
As long as I have my troubled mind
I need this land to prevail
I will stay inside for now
And for as long as I can
Sky is the limit protected me
Since his wonderland began
But under his shadow lies reality
That's where it all ends
Under his shadow I must face
The society of fiended friends
Author notes
"Can you find inspiration here?" is the contest I chose, and I picked the line "Under His Shadow".
allpoetry.com/Contest/731460
Hope you like 
Written March 7th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- Contest #100 by Samplette.
1500 points, ended March 12, 2005, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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lovely poem Mj.. I can definitely get inspired in this.. ths s a sort of .. wat to say.. like, beyond boundaries.. when sky s the limit.. suc ha joyous feeling creeps inside
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lovely poem Mj..
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Excellent. Very well written. Makes me think of the darkness in us all, and the things we feel we need to live that only hurt us in the end.
I love your writing style - your delicate words. It's almost like I can hear your accent through your lines. Strange I know, but I really can.
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to be honest, i can't really get this, but i still think this is good.. as samplette said, it's well written. pen on, my friend
-m-
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A very nicely written piece of poetry. Thank you so much for entering the contest and following rules. This gives an entry to the drawing as well.
S♠m
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