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Thank You

Every day something happens
And Your love helps me through

My sins of the past You have forgotten
All my hurts and sorrows are gone

Without You I do not know where I would be
My life would be a utterly pointless

Hope after death would mean nothing to me
Without You everything would be completely upside down
I would be ruled by guilt and shame

Thank You for helping me through each and every day
Thank You for giving me parents who brought me up right

Thank You for erasing my imperfections and unrighteousness
Thank You for carrying my burdens when I couldn't

Thank you for releasing me from all bonds of sin
Thank You for letting me spend eternity with You

When the day comes when I see you face to face
I won't be able to hold back tears
of love and thanks

Author notes

Words cannot express my thanks and love
Written March 6th, 2005

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  • No.Longer.Bleeding
    February 16, 2007

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    awesome job of praise and thanks! definitely a poem of a change God has made. each stanza had wonderful praise or change inside of you that God brought! awesome job

    Monica <3

  • Silver Cascade
    January 5, 2006
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    Wow such a beautiful poem! Its a wonderful feeling having Jesus for our Best Friend.
    Amazing lines!! "When the day comes when I see you face to face
    I won't be able to hold back tears
    of love and thanks" I really felt very close to God! Great work!


  • jewel4Him
    January 1, 2006
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    noelle u did a wonderful job in this poem thanx 4 entering


  • Andu
    June 16, 2005
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    Ah, the gratitude from the heart, very rarely seen, but wonderfully expressed with it surfaces. This has been a great poem, it's got dimension and a personal touch which makes it a heartfelt and interesting read. Great write!


  • josh-13
    March 22, 2005
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    awww, this is awesome. I like it, It's personal and deep. This is a realy good poem and an awesome insperation to the reader. Not many understand the closeness People have with God, It's hard when someone has never felt God. This is an awesome poem, and who knows, One day your poetry might intregue readers to persue closeness. You are a very talented writer.


  • WhiteGirl
    March 9, 2005
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    I think that this is a deep and beautiful poem. great job!


  • Artemis Gem
    March 8, 2005
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    beautiful!!!!!
    I'm feelin real crappy after the dancing and alexander beat me I lost on time....... Well, anyway, this poem is just what I needed to hear!!!!!! Great job, keep it up!!!!!!!
    Gem~chan

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