Happy birthday to someone special
That filled my life with hope
I wish you the best in what’s left
Of our beat up and destroyed road
I leave you this needle
Upon your sorrow-filled grave
As tears stream steadily down my face
For the very first time, in a long time
And I scream till my throat bleeds
I run till my legs fall from under me
All in hopes of destroying my past
Making you come back
You were the only thing in my life
That made me travel as far as I’ve come
You kept me going, you helped me
I miss you more than anyone could
I loved you more than I loved it
I’m still in love with you, Mel
And I’m sorry I ruined what we had
Till my last breath, I will want to take it back
It’s been proven that stupidity kills
And I just want to hold you once more
Wipe away just on last tear
And tell you how much I love you
I’m a worthless piece of shit
That hurt you, and did so much more
I deserve to be the one in the grave
Not you, Mel, you were too good for that
I should be the one dead
I don’t know how much longer I’ll make it
Without your loving touch keeping me here
I miss you, babe, I hope to see you again
Author notes
I know it's shit, just needed to write, so I did...
Written March 6th, 2005
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This is not shit, this is the purest of emotion, hwo the fuck can that be shit? maybe you feel shit. . .
But isnt it better to feel shit then not to feel at all.
I love the descriptions you used in this, i loved the way you described your regret . . .
Please dont worry, i know you have no idea who i am, and that im probably jsut some mouthy kid, but if you ever wanna talk you know my screen name
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Wow, this is so great. It's not shit, no not at all. I love this, it has so much emotion and it almost brought a tear in my eye. I don't usually get tears in my eyes from poems, this is just so great. I like this a lot, and I think you did an amazing job on it. It was really sad. Great work once again.
Keep writing, and I'll keep reading.
Take Care,
!*-Jasmine-*! -
no, its not shit zave, its a very good and heart-felt piece...a great poem..you're not worthless either..dont even think that...very very good poem....great job...toodles
until next time,
Amaranth -
it's not shit hun. and you aren't shit either. this is such an amazing poem. it's so touching. i'm so sorry for everything that happened, but look how far you've come. luv you zave and stay strong.
~Alex
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