Does the flying pig advertise?

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Written March 6th, 2005

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  sonik
  August 26, 2007
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  well, i'm muesli addicted .........................................i would buy them ;-)

  
• fairy stick girl
  October 19, 2006
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  do u like pigs that much, that you wrote a poem about it? if so then that is abit wired but cool...
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  forget my name
  May 9, 2005
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  oo nice ideas man but nope sorry
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  April 2, 2005
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  I now know the secret message, some of you have touched on it but you really need to look deeper.
• PurpleCoconut
  March 26, 2005
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  Haha, this made me laugh. It reminded me of when I'm around my friends and it gets randomly quiet so someone says something that doesnt make sense like "pickle weasel" and everyone laughs. Randomness is good. If there is a secret message.. way to go- because it's going to stay secret I immagine. I think the best part about it is that after telling people to buy your cereal is at the end you say youve got things to do. As if they have just waisted your time by you having to tell them to buy your cereal. It's ingenious really. I can tell you are quite the deep philisophical thinker.
  Or something along those lines. If you ever wish to share with the world the secret message, don't forget to share with me. I'd appreciate that.
• Edge of Dreams
  March 26, 2005
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  Uh.. the secret message (because otherwise I wouldn't comment on this junk)...uh...
  1)You're not advertising, you're demanding.
  2)You're making a social commentary about how people are so brainwashed and indoctrinated by government and religion.
  3)It's a joke on that time Coke used subliminal messages during the superbowl and sales went up 70%.
  Uh... I don't know. Just tell me if I'm right!
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  natari
  March 26, 2005
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  Cerealistic

  Now I'm going to be going crazy allday figuring out the subliminal message here.Flying pig hmmm don't buy..don't buy
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  April Renee
  March 25, 2005
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  i dont really get it...but okay..lol..different. interesting. good job. enjoyed. must find something else to write to get my points..and there..i think i did it.
  
  Blu
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  abc123uandme
  March 24, 2005
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  hahhahaha this made me smile and laugh, thanks for brightening my day, by the way WHATS THE SECRET MESSAGE????
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  Edna Sweetlove
  March 24, 2005
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  .............................................

  Never before have I been so moved by a poem as I have been moved by this. Just look at some of the touching lines....
  
  
  Buy my cereal...................................
  .........................................................................
  ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................Buy my cereal!
  
  
  Yes indeed, my life has been changed.
  Edited on Mar 24, 7:19 because 'I left a fullstop out'.
• marrow
  March 24, 2005
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  What the bloody hell? Hahaha.. this poem did do one thing for me.. helped me decide what kind of cereal I want before I leave for school in an hour.
  
  Justin
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  Kendall Campbell
  March 23, 2005
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  haha i know i've missed out on your secret message but this actually made me laugh so good work.
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  forget my name
  March 7, 2005
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  ok ok less of the sarcasm ppl.......there is a genuine secret message......but ya hav 2 find it urself
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  BlooQKazoo
  March 7, 2005
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  wow. *buys cereal* so... *noisily munches it...* what was the secret message? this is funny. it made me laugh. and just like ash i wanna write just like you, theres so much emotion in this piece.... lol
  love polly xxxxxxxxxxxx
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  x dark fairie x
  March 6, 2005
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  thank you ollie for wasting my time *smiles* very meaningful and emotive, i love the way you used the words to ivoke suchstrong imagery and feeling, this piece really reached out to me and nearly made me cry. one day i wanna write just like you ollie -x-x-x-
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  Unoriginal
  March 6, 2005
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  darn
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  forget my name
  March 6, 2005
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  nope sorry no cereal 4 u im afraid....ya missed the secret message
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  Unoriginal
  March 6, 2005
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  the secret message? buy your cereal perhaps? lol... this made me laugh
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  forget my name
  March 6, 2005
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  Oh free cereal if you can find the secret message!
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  forget my name
  March 6, 2005
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  buy more cereal

  hee hee hee..............i knew ya wouldnt understand it
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  March 6, 2005
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  *Buys his cereal*, umm besides "wtf?" all I have to say is this is a positively motivated piece and that can only be good, having said that, wtf?

by forget my name

On Mar 6 12:04 PM 2005
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