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How I Spent My Winter Holiday

Making love to my baby
in the alley behind
the Abyssinia Cafe
in the suburbs of East Anglia--
the weather's cold and rainy,
but it's the heat and humidity
of boldest summer days
there in the backseat,
as we gasp and pant and sweat
in the after-glow of well-earned torpidity
from our torrid torrent of love....



    --Mishka Zakharin

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  • vampira1665 silver member
    May 21, 2006
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    Well helllllo! That was short but hot. Oh my!

    Back seat, sex and sweat, nice visuals.

    Hugs and bites, Vampy