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Fall

one flushed woodcock
feathers floating in the wind
table set for two

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Written March 6th, 2005

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  • Odanale
    March 23, 2005
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    Hmmm... I'm not so much into the whole idea of hunting, but still a nice poem. The first line is missing a syllable, unless we're supposed to pronounce it as "Flush-ed" (which would be cool!). But then you'd need an accent on your e.

  • pozo
    March 15, 2005
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    Great write, so romantic and well written Keep writing, this was an excellently romantic poem which I liked a lot
    All the best,
    Pozo


  • xXxSeductiveLovexXx
    March 7, 2005
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    Romantice are we?
    Table set for two.. this Haiku leave me with a feeling of love, warm evenings, and a full heart. It's so rich with feelings, emotions.. storys yet told. I love your Haikus~

  • a u r a
    March 6, 2005
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    This poem leaves me smiling -pretty picture-good feeling-


  • queen Moderators member
    March 6, 2005
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    Hey im glad to see you put on a new poem. Very good one i might add.

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